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高考英语作文:2011北京高考英语作文范文 情景作文
高考英语作文:2011北京高考英语作文范文 情景作文
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高考英语作文:2011北京高考英语作文范文 情景作文

摘要: 作文题目 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。 注意 作文题目 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。 注意: 1.词数:100左右: 2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.) 范文一: Dear Bob, I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由: 本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。 范文二: Dear Bob, Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you. Best wishes ! Yours, Li Hua 范文三: 满分理由: 本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。 Dear Bob, How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School. There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由: 本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。 范文四: Dear Bob, I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it. You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由: 本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。 范文五: Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop. It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month. Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由: 本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。 《高考英语作文:2011北京高考英语作文范文 情景作文》由留学英语组我整理(www.liuxue86.com)

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摘要: 2011年北京卷高考英语情景作文题目: 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事,请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊 英语园地 写一篇短文,词数不少于60。 2011年北京卷 星级老师 星级英语老师是通过层层筛选出来的,教学经验丰富,风格各有不同,点击进入课堂……[详细] 2011年北京市城六区高考英语一模试题 2011年高考英语考点大预测 | 高考英语复习四要素 谈初中英语与高中英语衔接 | 吕腾飞老师答疑专贴 高中英语应该怎么学 | 高考英语答题策略与技巧 2011年北京卷高考英语情景作文题目: 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事,请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文,词数不少于60。 2011年北京卷高考英语情景作文范文 Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flower and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher. 祝2011年高考学子金榜题名! 点击进入 2011高考英语作文专题 获得全部信息! 全国卷I 全国卷II 新课标卷 北京卷 天津卷 重庆卷 江苏卷 广东卷 浙江卷 山东卷 湖北卷 上海卷 江西卷 辽宁卷 福建卷 四川卷 安徽卷 海南卷 湖南卷 陕西卷 课程名称 课时 课程价格 视频解读 在线选课 秋季班高一年级英语目标清华北大班 15 2495 秋季班高一年级英语尖子班 15 2495 秋季班高二年级英语目标清华北大班 15 2495 秋季班高二年级英语尖子班 15 2495 秋季班高三年级英语目标清华北大班 15 2495 咨询电话: 010-52926678 (每天早10点至晚7点) 《高考英语作文:2011年北京卷高考英语作文 情景作文范文》由留学英语组我整理(www.liuxue86.com)